YAY! You did it! You're here taking action and doing the work to flex your songwriting muscles. You're taking a song that you feel, meh, about, or one that you feel AWESOME about, but just couldn't get the pieces to fit so was tossed aside, and you're sitting down to make it even better. To complete it.
Remember we're going for progress and action, not perfection.
Here's how to get started. Play the audio below and listen to the song that I re-wrote. Pay attention to the differences you hear in the first chorus vs. the second chorus.
Do you have a different opinion? Tell me about it!
Then go and do your own re-write. Post both versions on soundcloud, or in dropbox and send me the link.
If you have any questions, comments, or concerns, email me at dana@danacarmel.com
I can't wait to see what you come up with. I am oh so excited you're here.
Music and love,
D